tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post393633049880876867..comments2023-04-04T14:40:21.935+03:00Comments on Portia de sarmale: aduceri-aminteDoru Emanuelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12287758529916963086noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-323782937454527262010-08-24T15:26:23.175+03:002010-08-24T15:26:23.175+03:00ups,
uite cine a revenit!Oana ma bucur ca nu ai ui...ups,<br />uite cine a revenit!Oana ma bucur ca nu ai uitat de noi,dar sunt fericita ca ai depasit starea aia....aia....aia !Fie,trecem si [peste absente!<br /><br />ioana care astazi uite ce scrie pentru tine<br /><br />cuvintele așteptă<br />ascunse în coltul gurii<br />strivite sub a bocancilor talpă<br />lipită de buzele lui <br />ca un piercing <br />realizat contra cost <br />la un colț de stradă<br /><br />asa ca Oana ...la treaba!<br /><br />a si inca ceva:imi esti draga!Ioana.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11137509458638302436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-33410532400009407362010-08-24T11:09:56.752+03:002010-08-24T11:09:56.752+03:00ador poezia asta:D:X. Ioana, stiu ca am lipsit o v...ador poezia asta:D:X. Ioana, stiu ca am lipsit o vreme de pe blog dar daca iti zic ca in pauza asta mi-a trecut starea aia proasta, ba acum chiar mi-e extraordinar de bine ;;):X cred ca mi se pardoneaza absentele nemotivate:))Ghosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03776796572464827119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-88314753580708864882010-08-22T19:14:13.611+03:002010-08-22T19:14:13.611+03:00Ioana, e perfect:)Ioana, e perfect:)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15957615889826547280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-15038190264050777082010-08-22T18:59:15.030+03:002010-08-22T18:59:15.030+03:00Lori,am mancat un n
adica: priveste cum se scaldă-...Lori,am mancat un n<br />adica: priveste cum se scaldă-n sfiosul amurg<br /><br />ioanaIoana.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11137509458638302436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-80071501820090965152010-08-22T18:03:56.756+03:002010-08-22T18:03:56.756+03:00o...!!!Ma bucur ca va place!Hei,prea multa lauda !...o...!!!Ma bucur ca va place!Hei,prea multa lauda ! Lori:<br />ce zici de :priveste cum se scaldă sfiosul amurg?<br /><br /><br />ioanaIoana.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11137509458638302436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-35090025314717615702010-08-22T10:19:20.473+03:002010-08-22T10:19:20.473+03:00Genial:X
Sunt de acord cu Doru!:*
Stii ce? Ma gan...Genial:X<br />Sunt de acord cu Doru!:*<br /><br />Stii ce? Ma gandeam ca la primul vers sa mai adaugi un cuvant din doua silabe...iese putin din masura poeziei...De exemplu, "Privește cum se scaldă sfios/plapand/soptit în amurg"<br />E doar o idee:*<br />Oricum,genial.<br /><br />Lorelei.Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15957615889826547280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-88650642310090083152010-08-21T22:53:44.255+03:002010-08-21T22:53:44.255+03:00Ioana, te-ai intrecut pe tine aici.
Pe mine m-ai ...Ioana, te-ai intrecut pe tine aici. <br />Pe mine m-ai impresionat, recunosc. <br /><br />DoruDoru Emanuelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12287758529916963086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3736652003548797161.post-90830177312707604542010-08-20T23:14:17.578+03:002010-08-20T23:14:17.578+03:00I really really like it. :) well done! This is my ...I really really like it. :) well done! This is my opinion. So, everything is fine.Estherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16219408649677314164noreply@blogger.com